OUATIM Fic - Tangled

[tiggymalvern]

Now a trilogy in four parts - it's getting boring linking to the lot, so the previous fics are all here.

Only just over 10,000 words this time, less plot and more smut, which means most of it will make sense even if you can't be bothered ploughing through the previous 126,000. Still all the usual swearing, surprisingly little violence XD

Tangled.

Comments

[jo-lasalle.livejournal.com]

Awww, that was sweet! *g* And hot, and still nicely sociopathic, which should be a disturbing combination, but is really good fun. :-)

I really liked the interlude with the guy Sands doesn't kill, and also that El knows there's going to be guys Sands will not walk away from.

I loved that moment where it becomes clear that Sands not being willing to die for El is a factor in his favour. And when he thinks that Sands isn't about love, but about some elements of love, some of the time, and the whole story feels just like that; I love it.