Very good, I love the way you have Vash constantly analysing his actions, you really get his inteligence down perfectly. You also write his 'mask' well too, it's definatly that happy-go-lucky Gunslinger we know, and that edge of darkness you have, with the hygene and so forth, is perfect for Gunsmoke. Wonderful atmosphere and very hot description, good stuff!
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Date: 2005-10-30 04:48 am (UTC)