I like the third one, too! I think I just really enjoy it when you reach a "surprise" or something you're otherwise not expecting at the end of a sentence. I also enjoy the descriptiveness of #13, and the mystery/intrigue of #4 and #5. Excellent sentences, all!
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Date: 2021-05-06 06:13 am (UTC)