Fic Wot I Wrote

[tiggymalvern]

The muse prize this time goes to andmydog, who gets a completely accidental Christmas meme prezzie because of it. Although I'm fairly sure this isn't what you had in mind....

W/V, NC-17, lots of naughty sex words - I really don't need to tell you lot this stuff, do I?

And yes, I've now set two completely unrelated stories in the same gap in the manga in TriMax 6. Suck it down, I ain't apologising for it ;-)

Balance

Comments

I am guh'd.

[andmydog.livejournal.com]

Damn but you made it work! So not what I had in mind, but what I had in mind was less canon and less eloquent and more "I like handcuffs", so there ya go.

There are words, and comments, and complements, but there is also me going back and rereading that again. And again. Words must wait until I is coherent.


Suck it down, I ain't apologising for it ;-)

Yes ma'am!

Re: I am guh'd.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I'm just not capable of ignoring things like canon and characterisation to write what's convenient. Not for more than 100 words anyway. So I'm glad you liked what you got!

There's also my brain to take into account. It's the sort of brain where you say 'handcuffs' and my brain says 'Bondage! Yeah! I could write bondage where neither of the guys really wants to be doing bondage. It never does things the obvious way when it can make it complex instead....

Re: I am guh'd.

[andmydog.livejournal.com]

It never does things the obvious way when it can make it complex instead....

Well, right. Where's the fun in doing things the easy way?


Besides, from what I remember, the muse-ing was "handcuffs! You should totally write handcuffs!sex!"


Again, damn. This was some wicked hot awkward-ouchie goodness.

Re: I am guh'd.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Oh, your prompt was rather more eloquent than that, dear, if a tad on the tongue-in-cheek side *g*
"There needs to be a fic that explores the dynamics of the V/W relationship through powerplay. There needs to be a way of expressing more of *who* these characters are by the way they interact in bed. There needs to be more weight given to what has made them who they are. There needs to be...handcuffs."

Just asking for handcuffs may well not have worked!

Re: I am guh'd.

[andmydog.livejournal.com]

"My God! I'm full of shit!" /2001 voice



...did I really say that? Ouch.

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Re: I am guh'd.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

LJ will always come back to bite you on the arse! (http://www.livejournal.com/users/tiggymalvern/6544.html?thread=156304#t156304) *snort*

Too late to regret it now.... *g*

Re: I am guh'd.

[andmydog.livejournal.com]

He let his eyes drift over Wolfwood - the dark hair, sweat-damp, that hung down across his eyes, the press of ribs against his skin as he took in air, the cock that shifted against his stomach as he moved. He wondered how many times now he'd sucked on that cock, felt it press between his lips and tremble against his tongue as he swallowed, the sand crushed beneath his knees. He knew Wolfwood's body, the sheen of sunlight on skin, the touch of him in the darkness, the changing taste of him as his tongue swept from mouth to throat to cock, and knowing didn't take the edge off. Knowing only made him want more, like he wanted now, watching Wolfwood stretch himself with his own fingers because...

Wolfwood wouldn't fuck him, because he was chained.

That was the one thing that made it okay.

"You can fuck me if you want."

...um. Regret? What is this regret you speak of?

Remind me to be pretentiously kinky more often.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Even the US dictionaries list both versions. (http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=focussed) It makes sense to me to spell it the same way as that great American word 'cussed' *shrug*

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

A language with a bastard mix of Mediterranean and Germanic origins, plus a few other bits thrown in for fun, was never going to be too big on logic, sadly. I pity the rest of the world trying to learn it....

[tameiki.livejournal.com]

Ha! And you bitch about Japanese and Kansaiben... *pouts* There's too damn many different versions of English floating around.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Japanese is beautifully logical, most of the time. Kansai-ben is also logical, it's just that its logic relies on you knowing all the verb ending permutations comprehensively in order to guess the parts of the sentence they mised out. Which kind of sucks for me! But believe me, I know it would be much worse if I were an ESL trying to learn Glaswegian or Geordie....

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

I never knew bondage could be so warm and fuzzy!

I live to subvert expectations *g* It's just no fun doing things the obvious way!

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

So hot, again. And their characters feel so real here.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Hey, it's your job to tell me when they don't! ;-)

You would tell me, right?

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

I would, I would! But characterization's hardly ever off with you, or even close to it.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Fortunately I can say the same to you! Isn't it nice to have a beta who always agrees with your charaterisation? ;-)

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes it is.

[tameiki.livejournal.com]

Oh. My. God. Tiggy! That was just... um. I'm speechless. wow.

andmydog has my devout admiration for getting you to write this fic. *bows in humble thanks*

Thanks for making my night. *skips off to bed with images of Vash in handcuffs...*

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Vash would look so good in handcuffs, wouldn't he? Almost as good as Wolfwood would, but I didn't have a good excuse to tie him up! Except I might do now....

Your fic, I'm afraid, is still insisting that I can't write a PWP and it wants deeper psychological levels. I just need to figure out what they should be. But at least now you know what I was doing at yaoi-con at strange hours of the night and morning! And I don't even ask for a shoulder massage in return, though you're very good at them ;-)

[hibem.livejournal.com]

Awkward. Deliberate. Tender. Fic sex is so often fast and hard and driven and... a little too perfect. _{Not that I don't like it that way. But mixing it up is very, very good.}
I love your Vash and Wolfwoods. You always get right inside their heads and pluck out some new parts of them to show us.
Oh, and did I mention that was delicious?
The brain is the most important sexual organ after all.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

I'd just get bored writing sex the same way all the time (though fast and hard definitely has its place with these two, oh, yeah....). Sadly, I'm going to run out of variations fairly soon and I'll have to start repeating. Damn.

There's no way the guys would keep me writing all these fics, however hot they were, if they didn't have such interesting heads to poke around in :-) I love Nightow, I really do!

[uiggu.livejournal.com]

I am mad envious of so impressed by the fact that the psychological stuff feels just as real as the sex. I love how the power dynamic shifts all the time. I love how ya think it's gonna be Wolfwood getting it because that would be the expected conclusion, but then it's all flipped on its head. Oh, and handcuffsyey!!!!1111 <3

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Yay! So glad you think the psychology worked - that was kind of evolving on its own as I went along and the detail came in. There was a lot going on in there that I hadn't originally known there was going to be!

Hee! I like to keep people guessing about who's getting what in my fics. I don't see anything between these two guys as a foregone conclusion!

[imre-nico.livejournal.com]

criminally hot.

only Tiggy's eloquent and erudite porn could drag me away from the chaotic vortex of Juries week. And my self-imposed LJ exile-in-haitus had been working too...damn you.

Damn you, Tiggy Malvern, and your impudent smut.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Yay, you live! I'm glad it's only busy stuff and not nasty stuff that's been keeping you away. People have been wondering about you. Good luck with the Juries Week anyway!

[bandita.livejournal.com]

Yes, V/W bondage sex!! And I love how you managed to make it so sweet and hard at the same time. Also, excellent job on the characterization; you've got it down pat.

I loved this! =D

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Hey, thanks! I'm really glad you're happy with the characterisation - when I was issued the handcuffs challenge, my first reaction was that it couldn't be done, because I don't exactly see these two guys sitting around one evening and saying, "Hey, our sex life's getting a bit stale. Maybe we should try something kinky to liven it up?" XD

Sweet and hard pretty much sums up everything I feel about the V/W relationship. I don't know what you'd honestly call it - much more than a buddyfuck and nothing like a romance. It defies easy categorisation, very much like the guys themselves. But then if it was simple, I wouldn't be an addict *g*