OUaTiM fic the Third

[tiggymalvern]

More El/Sands Mexico fic - following on from Wires and Strung. Sands got what he wanted, but that doesn't mean he has to stop there.

58,000+ words, and hopefully fulfilling the quota of offensive language, blasphemy, violence and smut that a Mexico fic of any length requires XD

Frayed

Warning: My usual fandom American betas are snowed under with life business right now, so this hasn't been filtered by them - any stray Britishisms entirely my fault, and if you point them out, I'll gratefully fix 'em!

Comments

[fuzipenguin.livejournal.com]

Yay! This is definitely on my reading list for this weekend :)

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

this is the part where I love all over this story, right?

cause... damn. this is GOOD - it's ddiffernet than the vast majority of El/Sands fics out there, and that's ina good way. I'd started to think that there is no way to write good El/Sands without dysfunctional codependancy and then thisblew my mind. Absolutely. :D the fact that Sands manages on his own just fine is wonderfully awesome :) and the ending? Brilliant. Poor Lorenzo :P *waves Whore!Lori banners* that part just made me squeee :P

I really really do love and adore this story to bits. Awesome job! :D

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Awesome!

"Aren't you going to introduce me to your friends, El?"

"No."

♥

[jambery]

Read it over the weekend and enjoyed it. I really like the way you characterize Sands. (Yours is the only fic in the fandom that I read.) It's made me want to see the movie again.

[shinra-lackey.livejournal.com]

Hi! Just saw your fic on the agentsands community and devoured it all over the past two days. Wow. I really loved your Sands portrayal and while even though it is slashy, there's still tons of action, which you describe beautifully.